Lightly pinging the metal roof
Distant thunder
Raining harder
Heavy now
Drumming the metal roof just inches above our heads
Steady
Thunder moves closer
Eventually
A torrential downpour
Cozy in here
Intense storm
Long storm
Thunder rumbling, crackling, rolling
Above us
Around us
Crackling here, then over there
Rumbling overhead and rolling across the sky
Suddenly quiet
A bird calls furiously outside the window
Storm pulls away
Thunder rumbles softly in the distance
Then none
Peace
Quiet
* Originally written in 2012... as experienced from the loft of this cabin...

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